Saturday, 14 July 2018

Announcing The Reflections of Zantir Xanderfell

Folks, I've been a little busy this year with projects, problems and travel, so it's taken me a while to get round to doing this update, but it's finally here, the third in my fantasy series, heretofore to be known as 'Memoirs of the Fated', is on it's way.

It's time to announce, The Reflections of Zantir Xanderfell.

As Lord Protector of Icon, Zantir bears heavy responsibilities, but she's come a long way from her time as a ruthless mercenary.

But when an old acquaintance reappears, she learns the past can never truly be escaped, redemption is not so easily bought, nor love so easily courted... 

Following on from The Reminiscence of Good King Carnack and The Scars of Jocasta Lacroix, this story introduces a new character in Zantir Xanderfell and once again takes a look at Carnack from a fresh perspective.

As ever, the story itself is self contained, so you're not missing anything if you haven't read the others. It's heavily influenced by heist stories and has a few more hints towards extra-dimensional elements going on behind the scenes.

The cover is by the insanely talented V Rios who really ran with the design of Zantir's costume on the cover, and I really love her take on the character.

All that's left to say is another big thanks to Less Thank Three for publishing my crazy worlds, and if you're all interested, watch this space for more big new coming soon.

Saturday, 26 May 2018

May Update and Dispatches from Toronto

Things seem to finally start gaining momentum again, so I just thought I'd post an update with what I've been up to and what's to come. The bulk of this month had been taken up with preparing for and attending the Toronto Comics Art Festival, which was a great experience and a valuable resource for my professional work. I got to meet and talk to a bunch of creators I highly respect, and you can read about that in some of the shout-outsI gave on twitter here.

With that out of the way, here's how things are going at the moment:

  • I've got a third Ebook coming out in July, following on from both The Reminiscence of Good King Carnack and The Scars of Jocasta Lacroix. It's called The Reflections of Zantir Xanderfell, and like the others it's a fantasy story that concerns a character looking back on their earlier life and reflecting on how their experiences have changed them. You can take a look at the listing here.
  • I'll be at Sheffield Comic Con August 18th - 19th selling copies of Tales of the Modern Realms and hopefully some prints.
  • In case you missed it I recently posted a new illustrated short story, The Time We Take. This one is a science fiction story that was originally written for a zine that never got finished, so I've expanded it and released it here.
  • I'm planning on doing a few more pieces of artwork and another illustrated short story before I return to work on the John Paul Jones Comic. The project really got knocked back thanks to the problems last year, so I'm giving it some breathing room before getting back to it.
  • Speaking of artwork I've been really pushing to improve lately, you can see some of my efforts below.



Beyond that I'm going to keep writing and drawing and working on things. As ever you can support my by checking out my books here and here, and follow me on Twitter or Tumblr.

Cheers, and that's all for now.

Tuesday, 22 May 2018

The Time We Take

The Time we Take
By Jack Harvey

Crys Townsend had a complicated history. She was of mixed Native-American and Irish parentage, grew up on the British moon colony of Tomstown and enlisted in the Sol Space Corps on her day of graduation. She had completed two tours, and had found herself holding the rank of Sargent Major. She was Quartermaster of the Sylvia Ripley Tekakwitha, a Deuch-Class Transport Craft assigned to ship synthetic meat to the independent colonies.

Crys ran a tight schedule and an even tighter system. Organising cargo was her calling in life, apparently, though few warmed to her because of it. She strode stubbornly through the neon-lit corridor. Somebody had misfiled a crate of medical alcohol, and it didn't take somebody of her talents to figure out where it was.

Cry entered the break room to see a huddle of Earth born and Colonial staff handing out the stuff like it was solstice shandy.

“Sargent Major,” beamed Cooper, one of the orderlies. He wasn't drunk, but he was tipsy enough. “You've died your hair? I like the red!”

She couldn't stop herself from instinctively running a hand through her short hair. “What's all the commotion in here?” She asked, sternly.

Cooper saluted comically. “New recruit ma'am, Name of Loriz Ventura, transfer from the Vizaris fleet. She's kicking the entire crew's asses at pool.”

Cys had heard of the Vizaris, though she had never met one. They were visually similar to humans, but with bright red skin, slightly pointed ears and thin, dreadlock-like tendrils instead of hair.

Crys glanced over, and saw that the Vizaris was bent backwards over the pool table. She pulled back the cue and executed a perfect trick shot. She rose as the crowd cheered, and her eyes matched Cry's almost immediately.

Crys swallowed. The Vizaris looked as though she had been lifted from the front of a glamour magazine. Her hips were wide, and she had the curves in all the right places. They swayed seductively as she walked across the room.

“Hey Loriz, let me introduce you to the Quartermaster,” Cooper muttered drunkenly. “Crys Townsend, meet Loriz Venturea.”

“Pleasure to meet you ma'am,” Loriz said smiling.

Twelve Years Later

Dr Joseph Hussain fastened the button on his collar and turned towards Crys. “How do I look?” he asked.

Crys brushed one of his shoulders. “Like the man who single handedly exterminated Kholera-B.”

Joseph smiled, and she smiled back.

“You're a hero Joseph. I don't think anyone will care about a few creases.”

“I don't feel like a hero,” he answered. “I still feel a scared little Indian boy enrolling on a psychology course. This isn't even my field.”

Crys fastened her own collar.

“Besides,” he continued. “None of this could have been done without your work on distributing the vaccine. You are being honoured too remember?”

She shrugged, the formal uniform felt tight. She couldn't remember when she had last wore it. “I was only doing my job. What about Mary, or Dixon, or the Admiral?”

“They'll be around,” Joseph said, polishing his ocular implant as he made his way outside. “But we're the ones who were chosen to represent the Corps, so we have to endure the limelight.” He held out his hand to the open door. “Are you ready? They're waiting for us.”

Crys walked into the Visarian sunlight.

The Visarian capital looked like it was made out of the glass paperweights that Crys' mother used to put on her mantelpiece. They were walking down the great Panna Mall, flanked by the musicians and standard bearers of the corps. The sky was a pale pink in colour.

Thousands of red and orange skinned Visarians cheered and waved to them, and wisp like streamers were thrown from more strange glass-like structures. Crys was too in awe to take any of it in, and instead tried to stay calm, marching in step with Joseph.

Eventually they came to a set of stairs that looked like liquid. Crys was worried she would slip and fall, but noticed they were quite traversable once her foot set down on the surface. Carefully, she and the other members of the Corps walked up the stairs. A v-shaped door opened in front of them, leading to a large circular room.

The room reminded Crys of Roman Senates from the epics they used to watch on flat-films in culture class. Around her stood members of the Visarian Parliament, wearing their ceremonial robes. They began to speak, as representatives approached with some kind of medal to honour her and Joseph with.

Crys was still looking around in wonder. She failed to take in what the representatives were saying as the medal was pinned onto the navy-blue fabric of her uniform.

Something had caught Cry's eye. Or rather, someone.

About two rows up she saw a face she recognised. The Visarian didn't notice her at first, but then their eyes met, and she turned away quickly.


Loriz thrust her arms forward as the sati-weights pushed against her. The muscles in her arms and back tensed as they forced the two floating cylinders forwards, fighting against what was, essentially, the planet Visaris' own rotation.

Once she was satisfied with the work on her arms, she approached the grav-walkers. These thin devices attached to her feet and increased their gravitational pull by increments. Loriz marched around the room until she felt the muscles on her calves begin to ache. She then increased the settings a tenth more than she was comfortable with.

She could take the pain, so long as it would take her mind off things.

She stared out the window over the grand glass city.

Then Crys entered the gym.

Loriz didn't react, instead she carried on pacing the room. But Crys didn't say anything either, and this bothered Loriz.

She sat down on a bench, sweating. “What are you doing here?” she said, trying not to sound angry.

“The secretariat told me you'd be here. They were wondering why you were missing out on the festivities.”

Loriz didn't answer.

“It's not every day that one of the deadliest diseases of the cosmos...”

“I was trying to get away from you,” Loriz said as she stood quickly.

Crys dropped upon realising how Loriz towered over her, shoulders broad, arms and legs thick with muscle.

Crys looked away. “I know that's it's been a while, and that we didn't part under the best of circumstances...”

“What?” Loriz said, forcing Crys to look back up at her towering frame. “You make it sound like we agreed to part. I contracted Kholera-B and got dragged off back home for treatment. You said you'd be seeing me as soon as Hussain synthesised the vaccine.”

“Yes, well,” Crys continued, trying to sound professional. “That proved more difficult than expected. I thought I'd be able to get away, but duty required I oversee the distribution...”

“Duty!” Loris spat, storming over to the window. The purple sky reflected against her red skin. “You're still a career climber after all this time.”

Crys clenched her fist, trying to remain calm.

“For two years we were barely apart and a decade goes by and you don't even send me a message or anything.”

“Oh come on!” Crys shouted. “Two years of of dragging you around drunk? Two years of you bouncing off walls and dropping your pants when I was trying to work?” Crys shook her head, the professional demeanour well and truly gone. “Two years of being accused of being a sucker for a pretty face and hot body?”

Loriz turned quickly, her wide eyes narrowed. “That's all I was to you?”

Crys put a hand to her face, fearful to shed tears for the first time in years. “That's... that's not what I meant.” She stopped, her voice lowered, almost to a whisper. “Of course you meant more to me than that.”

Loriz's face softened. She threw a towel over her neck and walked over to a hovering glass bench. Crys joined her, and was surprised to find that the seat was surprisingly warm.

Loriz put an arm around her.

“You got... you got big,” was all that Crys could say.

“Visarian biology. As the females get older our muscle density increases. Most let it go in time, but I decided to keep working out.” Loriz paused for a moment. “It reminded me of our time in the corps.”

There was something different about Loriz's voice. It was sharper. More adult. Crys wondered what happened to that young fool who treated military missions like spring break.

“I'm sorry,” Crys said, more sincerely. “After you had gone all I could think about was the distribution, my duty to the Corps and the people it protected. I should have stopped by, called or something, but emotionally I couldn't do it.”

“So what brought you here?” asked Loriz curiously. “Why come see me now?”

“I don't know,” answered Crys. “I was kind of hoping we'd just begin again.”

Loriz stood, it was her turn to be official now. “I appreciate that, but times have changed. I'm a member of parliament now. I can't just abandon all that for a whirlwind romance.”

Crys nodded.

“But your tour is up now right?” she asked. “And Visaris can be a beautiful place to spend a life.”

Crys stood quickly, and straightened herself up. “I understand,” she said, ending the conversion quickly. “It was good to see you again.”

Loriz nodded, picking up on Crys' rebuttal.

They shook hands, and Crys noticed Loriz's particularly firm grip.

“It was nice to see you too,” Loriz replied.


Joseph was slouched over the dimly lit blue-neon bar. He and Crys were well on their way, and were seemingly the only ones to keep the barman company.

“So what now?” Crys asked, through a haze of alcohol.

“Now?” Joseph answered. “I don't know. A member of the Newtown Medical Academy caught me earlier, says there’s a position of my choosing waiting for me if I want it.”

Crys' eyebrows raised. “That's great Joseph, congratulations.”

“Blegh, I think I'll turn him down.” Joseph said grimly.

“What?” Crys shot, surprised. “I thought that was always your plan? Spend a few years in the Corps Psychological Section until you get an opening for a cushy high paying teaching job. You never used to shut up about it.”

Joseph gazed off into seemingly nothing. “That was before Kholera-B. After everything we've seen, after everything we've done, can you honestly go back to the way things were?”

Crys realised it had been ten years. She was a different person now.

Joseph continued “I think I'll draw up my pay, buy a modest craft, and open up a clinic on the outer colonies. Bring help to people who really needed it.”

Crys nodded.

“What about you?” He asked. “You think Loriz was serious about letting you stay? You two were pretty tight back in the day.”

Crys looked into her drink, a glowing blue cocktail that tasted mostly of mango. “I don't think so. It was ten years ago, I can't see myself giving up my life for her now.”

Joseph wanted to say something then thought better of it. Then he suddenly jolted up. “Oh by the way I just remembered, the Admiral dropped by before, wanted to give you this.”

Joseph pulled out a paper envelope and handed it to Crys.

“A paper message?” she asked, surprised. “Who uses these anymore?”

“Don't know,” Joseph replied. “Must be important.”

Crys opened the letter quickly and read it.

“Well? What does it say?”


In spite of the city's alien nature, what could be best described as the 'ballroom' was oddly familiar. It was a tall room, open floor for dancing, with tables off to the side for food and drink.

As human, Vizarian and other feet tapped the black and grey chequered floor, Crys simply leaned over in a corner, lost in thought.

As the glass of champagne started to warm in her hands, Crys felt a shadow fall over her.

It was Loriz. She was dressed in a long, cream coloured ball gown. It was open at the arms, emphasising her wide shoulders and biceps. Crys was taken aback, she never thought she'd ever see Loriz dressed so elegantly.

“Would you care to dance,” she asked, a welcoming smile on her face.

Crys took Loriz's hand without answering. The grip was soft, not at all like the dismissive shake from earlier.

They moved into the centre of the floor, as a new song started. Crys could recognise strings, a wind instrument, and something she couldn't quite put her finger on, but as they began they quickly they became lost in each others eyes.

“I'm sorry about earlier,” Loriz said softly as they swayed. “It was presumptuous of me to assume you'd be ready to talk about these kind of things.”

As they twisted to the music Crys looked away, unsure how to answer.

“What is it?” Loriz asked, sensing her discomfort.

“I got a message this evening,” Crys started. “It's from the Secret Service. They're offering me a job. Full time, low risk.”

“Congratulations,” Loriz said half-heartedly.

“I've till the end of the night to accept,” she continued, her voice wavering. “But you have to understand, if I say yes, I'm off the map for good. We'll never see each other again.”

Loriz swallowed, and for the first time since their reunion Crys could see her vulnerability.

They danced a little longer, and Crys moved closer. Loriz let go of one hand, and put a large arm around Crys, resting a hand on her back.

“We had some good times didn't we?” Loriz said. “Those two years?”

“The best,” Crys answered smiling.

The dance was coming to an end now. Both women paused.

The music stopped, and they let each other go. Dancers moved and shifted between the two of them, pushing them apart.

“Well,” Loriz said. “Have you decided?”

Crys looked her in the eye and answered. “I have.”

Jack Harvey 2018

Monday, 9 April 2018

April Update and the state of things

So I was hoping that come April I’d have some artwork to share with you all and a good idea of what art-based projects would be on their way. Unfortunately the computer problems haven’t really let up. While the freezing issue was resolved back in December, it wasn’t long after that the computer stopped installing Windows updates. It was out of commission for a few weeks because of that.

More recently I was all ready to get my head down and make up for lost time with a brand new tablet and suddenly a new problem surfaced. The computer has slowed down to a crawl and It’s currently away again to see if it can be fixed.

If afterwards I still have problems with the computer then I’m going to have to look in to getting a completely new one. I’m also considering getting a dedicated laptop for writing and artwork on top of that. Neither of these options are cheap, and I’m doing okay for now, but if you want to help out in any way, consider checking out my self-published book, or short ebooks.

I’m still keeping my head down and working, however. So here are a few things to keep an eye on for the next few months.
·         I’m going to be at the Toronto Comics Art Festival from May 11th to 13th. I plan on attending a bunch of workshops and seminars, so if you’re there I’d love to say hello.
·         I’ll also be at Sheffield Comic Con from August 18th to 19th. I’ll be selling copies of Tales of the Modern Realms as well as some prints. Hopefully new ones if I can get things back on track.
·         There’ll be a third in my Ebook series coming out from Less Than Three, probably around June or July time. There’ll be more info coming closer to the time.
·         I still plan on writing a few articles about comics and video games here and there, so I’ll try and get to a more regular output on that.

There are a bunch of other projects in progress too, and I’m hoping to fit one more convention visit in this year too. As ever, thanks for your patience sticking by me, and thanks for reading.

Sunday, 28 January 2018

Bioware's Save File Transfer Experiment is a Failure and That's Okay

Contains minor spoilers for the Baldur's Gate, Mass Effect and Dragon Age series.

The title of this article is a bit of an aggressive statement, so before we go any further let me make it clear that I am a massive fan of Bioware. I love each and every one in their own way and they are easily some of my favorite games. For anyone who has yet to try a Bioware RPG I highly recommend all of them.

It's not my intention to bash Bioware with this article. Not at all. Instead, I just want to take a look at one element of their recent work that I think they've never really been able to stick the landing with, and that's the Save File Transfer. The promise of a persistent world state that lasts between games, and with it the promise that player choice will have some kind of significant pay-off.

The origins of the Save File Transfer goes back, way back, to the dawn of pen-and-paper role-playing.

While tabletop games were destined to be self-contained stories, even from its early days, Dungeons and Dragons always gave dungeon masters the opportunity to have players deal with the consequences of their actions. Even long term if they so choose. For example, If players killed an innocent character instead of using stealth or diplomacy then the DM could always, at their discretion, bring up this action several campaigns down the line as a blot on the player's reputation.

Likewise, players would always keep hold of their character sheets between games, enabling them to carry forward their experience and loot from one campaign to another. Down the line players could regale new groups with tales of their former exploits.

Essentially, pen-and-paper always had persistent worlds; it was just really up to those playing how hard they wanted to lean into it.

Come the dawn of the first Bioware era, it was clear that many compromises would have to be made when adapting from tabletop to digital. Baldur's Gate was Bioware’s first success at creating a virtual recreation of a Dungeons and Dragons campaign. The game came complete with twists and turns, multiple solutions to problems, and the freedom to play good, evil or somewhere in between.

Baldur’s Gate, however, could only recreate so much of its tabletop inspiration. The compromise came, of course, with the campaign now being limited by technology rather than imagination. Baldur's Gate could never hope to accommodate the myriad ways a tabletop player might approach a problem, and likewise it could never hope to offer the scope of options that a dungeon master might bring. Indeed, even today there is only so much freedom a video game can allow without limiting it elsewhere.

As such, the first form of Bioware's Save File Transfer, if you could consider it that, was the character Import/Export System. While Baldur's Gate 2 gave players the option to import their characters from the first game, carrying over skills, experience and potentially some loot, that is the be all and end all of what would be carried over, and the plot would remain unaffected.

While Baldur's Gate gave players the choice in who lives and who dies, which factions succeed and which fail, Bioware didn't have the resources to tailor its sequel to take all these choices into account. Instead they opted to create a 'canon' version of events somewhat influenced by popular choices, and moved the plot to another part of the world. Any discrepancy was written off as a side effect of your character's torture by series' villain Irenicus. Black Isle's Fallout 2 took a similar approach, as would most other choice-and-consequence stories.

As the first Bioware age rolled by, most developers sidestepped the issue entirely. Both entries in the Icewind Dale and Neverwinter Nights duologies were separated by significant time-skips, rendering the need for a save-file transfer pointless, while Knights of the Old Republic 2 kept the events of the first game at significant arm’s length.

All in all, the popular RPGs of the day managed to get by without feeling the need to acknowledge player choices over multiple games, and there didn't seem much of a desire by developers to experiment any further.

All this changed with the arrival of Mass Effect, the game that heralded Bioware’s golden age. Mass Effect was a much more cinematic, grander experience than previous games, and upon release Bioware made a statement advising players to keep hold of their save files, as the choices they made in the first game would be important in the second. Given that Mass Effect was a game where players had to make many difficult and morally debatable choices, it was a given that players were left believing these choices to be more significant than they actually were.

Likewise, its sister game, Dragon Age: Origins was released with the same caveat, making the persistent world state a signature feature of Bioware games going forward.

Once launch day had arrived, however, many were somewhat perplexed with the degree Mass Effect 2 acknowledged the choices of the first game. Many big choices, like whether the council lived or died, got little more than a mention in a handful of scenes. Often when choices you made during the first game were brought up, it felt little more than fan service. How the game chooses to treat characters that have the potential to be alive or dead, like companions Ashley and Kaiden, is a good example of this.

By choosing to acknowledge player choice, Bioware had also sacrificed the opportunity to tell certain stories. If it was possible for a character to live or die in the first game, then that meant said character’s importance in the plot would have to be reduced, as Bioware didn’t have the resources to essentially make several completely different stories that only some players would experience.

As a result, the main plot of Mass Effect 2, and player’s relationship with its characters, remains generally unchanged regardless of player choices. Had Bioware chose to make Mass Effect 2 without instituting the safe file transfer the main game probably wouldn’t have looked all that different.

Still Mass Effect 2 ended with significantly raised stakes and the possibility of multiple dead characters, leading many to believe that Bioware were saving their big consequences for the third game. Pre-release interviews seemed to suggest as much.

Following Mass Effect 2 was the sequel to Bioware's second flagship title, Dragon Age 2. While sharing many similarities to Mass Effect, Dragon Age: Origins was a very different game with a lot of nostalgia for the past in comparison to Mass Effect looking forward.

While Origins was well received by RPG veterans and had a much more self-contained story, few were surprised to hear that it would be following in Mass Effect's footsteps with a Save File Transfer system.

What did surprise many was how different Dragon Age 2 turned out to be. It was a smaller, more focused story that involved a brand new character in a different part of the world. The few loose plot threads that were left from Origins remained untouched. In retrospect there was even less justification for a persistent world state to feature in Dragon Age 2.

Indeed, most references back to the first game were little more than that. References. Alistair would appear as a King or a drunk depending on your choices, but this was in a simple cameo, separate from the main plot. Even worse, some choices you could make in Origins were even outright ignored in 2, such as Leliana appearing at the climax despite her death being possible in the previous game.

Like Mass Effect 2, Dragon Age 2 was a game that could have survived without a persistent world state, but also like Mass Effect 2, its ending hinted towards the Save File Transfer having a greater importance in the following game. Upon completion Dragon Age 2 is revealed to be a glorified prologue to the third game in the series, suggesting that player choices would be noted upon more thoroughly next time around.

A year later, Mass Effect 3 would finally arrive and the worth of the Save File Transfer would really be put to the test. In the run up, multiple interviews said that there would be serious consequences to certain choices from other games, and one even suggested that the ending would have over a hundred possible combinations, leading most to assume that the multiple endings would be modular, rather than limited to a choice of two or three.

Of course, the ending would go on to become Mass Effects 3's most controversial element, and while I don't have time to discuss it here, I think the reason for that controversy comes from the same failure to aptly implement the choice-and-consequence system that was promised.

To Bioware's credit, the execution of Mass Effect 3's Save File Transfer was much better than it had been in Mass Effect 2 or Dragon Age 2. Certain elements would result in actual gameplay consequences, such as having to fight Legion as a reprogrammed mini-boss had you handed him over to Cerberus, or saving the Salarian councillor becoming impossible if both Thane and Captain Kirrhae died in previous games.

While it has its disappointments, Mass Effect 3 does have one sequence that manages to live up to the promise of a persistent world and this is during the Krogan Genophage portion of Act 2. Here multiple choices from the previous games can pull the plot in a variety of different directions, and while it doesn't affect the gameplay or the layout of the missions, the story does feel otherwise dynamic.

Not only can multiple characters live or die depending on seemingly innocuous decisions from Mass Effect 2, it can also influence the player's final choice on whether to keep the Krogan sterilised or not. Should Wrex survive Mass Effect 1, he begins to lead the Krogan in a more peaceable direction, yet if he died he is replaced by Wreav, a much more viscous warlord. A paragon player could be more easily lead down one route under Wreav, than they would be under Wrex, and I think it's really cool that these choices can make such a thematic difference.

Likewise, should Dr Mordin Solus have survived Mass Effect 2, this sub plot becomes the story of his redemption, yet should he die he is replaced by Padok Wiks, an equally interesting and fully formed character who has their own agenda and even some fresh info on Mordin himself.

Had Mass Effect 3 managed to deal with its climax in the same way it did with the Krogan plot then the promise of the Safe File Transfer system would have been fulfilled, but unfortunately, the rest of the game mostly squanders the potential. Other character deaths are either squeezed to the sidelines (Tali, Miranda, Garrus,) not mentioned at all (Samara, Grunt, Jack,) or even worse, badly covered over with a nondescript character performing their role (Jacob).

Whoever out of Kaiden and Ashley survived, they rejoin the game as a squad-member this time around, but are relegated to a hospital bed for the first two acts. Should the council die in the first game they are replaced by non-identical copies with the same lines and personalities. Should the Rachni queen have died in the first game she is replaced by an identical clone. A pro-Cerberus Shepard is treated no different to an anti-Cerberus Shepard.

As the game goes on it becomes abundantly clear that most of the player’s choices had very little meaning, and most of the consequences manifest not as plot or gameplay but as part of the player’s 'Galactic Readiness Score', a generic number that locks off some of the endings if it is too low, though the game easily offers enough side-quests to build it up to a sufficient level regardless of any penalties your previous choices may have brought.

While Mass Effect 3 may have showcased the very best of what a persistent world state could offer with the Krogan subplot, it mostly revealed that it could never live up to the promises made in the previews. Now this is understandable, Bioware only has so many resources and couldn't exactly make a thousand different games for a thousand different choices, but after three games of hype, it's also understandable that players were starting to feel misled when it came to the importance of save files.

“Surely,” some began to argue, “a simple set of tick boxes at the start of the game and a modular plot based only around the biggest choices would be a more reasonable idea?”

With Dragon Age: Inquisition, Bioware disagreed, and ultimately sealed the Save File Transfer's fate.

Inquisition would see a slightly different approach to the persistent world state. Instead of having to keep your save games on file, Bioware instead would log your choices on an online database called Dragon Age Keep that you could check and tweak at your leisure.

This system came with an upside, and a downside. The upside was that players would have at-will access to the details of their world state and have the freedom to change those details should they so choose. The downside, possibly unforeseen by Bioware, was that access to these details would lead player to an unrealistic expectation on how significant their choices would be.

After all, why give players a log of all these choices if they weren't going to mean something further down the line?

Already hyped after the cliffhanger ending of Dragon Age 2, Bioware had put themselves in an even more impossible position with the fan-base.

Like Dragon Age 2, Inquisition benefited from featuring a brand new character in a brand new part of the world, but it also suffered from having to deal with the previous game’s plot threads. Just like with Mass Effect, Inquisition sidestepped most of the significant choices of the previous games. In particular, the Mage vs Templar plot that dominated the climax of Dragon Age 2 was rather unceremoniously concluded at the end of Act 1, and previous player character Hawke would appear in an entirely separate subplot.

It wasn't all disappointments though, while Inquisition’s use of choice-and-consequence would never reach the heights of the Krogan subplot from Mass Effect 3, it still managed to do some interesting things with its Save File Transfer. Hawke's personality and history would be referenced often and it was fun to see a previous character return in the way they did.

Perhaps the most interesting use of the Save File Transfer was the identity of the Wardern ally, which depending on the player’s choices at the end of Dragon Age: Origins. Should Alistair, a fan favourite of the series, remain in the Warderns he would appear as a returning veteran, the image of the man he always hoped he would be. Should Logain, villain of the first game, have been conscripted into the Warderns instead, he appears as a pariah, longing for redemption. Both of these are really cool character developments that are influenced heavily by the player's previous actions.

Unfortunately, most players will meet neither Alistair nor Logain, as a popular choice by players in Origins was putting one on the throne and executing the other. In this instance, their ally is Stroud, a Wardern who played a minor role in Dragon Age 2's DLC. While Stroud is by no means a bad character, he certainly isn't as interesting as Alistair or Logain, and it's a shame he's the Warden most players ended up interacting with.

Likewise, there are other interesting outcomes for choices most players didn’t make, like refusing Morrigon's dark pact or failing Sabastain's personal quest, so the consequences are experienced by fewer players.

Like Mass Effect 3, most of the player’s choices are relegated to offhand mentions or included in the War Table missions, similar to Mass Effect's Galactic Readiness score. There's no special items or bonus bosses based on past choices, and as with all the other games, the plot unfolds the same regardless of anything carried forward in your save file.

Like Dragon Age 2 before it, Inquisition ends on a cliffhanger and hints at things to come. Dragon Age Keep has all of the player choices logged, but it remains to be seen to what degree they will manifest in future games. Will we see a story arc like Mass Effect 3's Krogan sub-plot? Or will we simply be treated to numerous variations of 'Hey, remember when you chose to do this in a previous game?'

There's a glimmer of hope, of course, that Bioware will be able to pull off a Rube-goldberg of consequences that finally lives up to the promise of true choice-and-consequence gameplay, but after four games of mostly squandered potential, it's not hard to look forward with a more skeptical eye.

Indeed, it seems Bioware, to some degree, agrees, with its most recent game, Mass Effect: Andromeda dropping the save file system and persistent world state entirely. Now Andromeda justifies this due to it taking place billions of years apart from the prior games, but I think it's still a decent hint that Bioware is becoming less interested in trying to accommodate a billion different choices in place of making a decent game.

Looking back, it’s my opinion that most of Bioware's games would have been just as good without the Save File Transfer. Mass Effect 2 could have started with a simple checklist of “Did the council die?”, “Who became the earth delegate,” and “Who survived Virmire,” and left it at that. Dragon Age 2 and Inquisition both could have been kept as their own distinct stories without the need to reference previous player choices. Sure we'd be missing out on cool little cameos and moments, but if that means the resources otherwise going into getting a better game out there, I'm happy to let it go.

Where Bioware goes next remains to be seen. I anticipate Dragon Age 4 will incorporate Keep pretty heavily given that the Inquisitor has unfinished business with antagonist Solus at the end of the DLC, but beyond that, who knows? Andromeda's lacklustre reception has put that series on hiatus, and should future games decide to explore new characters in new parts of the world I think it's highly possible that Bioware will phase out the persistent world states and focus on more self-contained installments.

And do you know what? That's okay. While there'll always be a part of me that would like to play an RPG where every last choice the player makes has a knock on effect that develops through several games and creates an ending with thousands of differing variables, I know it's unlikely that such an RPG is ever going to happen.

For now I’m happy to wait and see what Bioware does next, whether they choose to continue the Save File experiment or not.

Jack Harvey 2018. Mass Effect and Dragon Age are (c) Bioware/EA

Sunday, 24 December 2017

December Update and the state of things

You’re probably wondering why I’ve been seemingly off-the-grid these past few months, so I just thought I’d clear things up before we hit the New Year.

I’ve continued to have persistent computer problems since the reset back in October. About two weeks after the update to Windows 10 the computer has been freezing up at intermittent points, regardless of what I’m doing at the time. I thought I’d managed to resolve the issue a few times, only for 2 -3 days later have it freeze up on me again. What makes it particularly troublesome is that often after freezing it can take multiple attempts to try and reboot the computer, eating up time and energy I’d rather be using on my work.

This is the main computer I use for writing, drawing and games, so my workload has really taken a hit because of this. I haven’t been able to do any artwork since October, delaying my John Paul Jones comic further and scuttling plans I had for getting an illustrated short story up for Christmas.
I apologise for the lack of updates. I’ve been mostly making the best of a bad situation by using my Dad’s laptop to get some further writing done, which means having time to get on tumblr and twitter is more difficult.

The computer is back from a repair now, though we still haven’t been able to identify the problem. Hopefully it’ll be fixed, but right now I’m just going to log off and enjoy the Christmas period. I’ve been toying with getting a laptop-tablet hybrid to use as a dedicated ‘work computer’ but they’re not cheap and if it comes down to me having to get a brand new PC altogether I may not be able to afford both.

All there is to say at this stage is that I’ve been cracking on with other projects that I’m hoping will manifest in the New Year. So I hope you won’t be waiting too long for something. I’m still planning to try and make some conventions next year, though I haven’t been able to put as much time and energy into sorting them out at this stage.

In the meantime, thanks for sticking with me. I hope I’ll have some more stuff up for you soon, but if you’d like to help me out, consider checking out my Modern Realms book and short story Ebooks.

Thanks, and have a good festive period.

Monday, 13 November 2017

The Longest Journey Series Retrospective – Part Three: Dreamfall Chapters (2016)

This is a multi-part series retrospective on Ragnar Tørnquist's Longest Journey Series, made up of The Longest Journey, Dreamfall and Dreamfall Chapters. Part One is here. Part Two is here.


It took seven years for The Longest Journey to see a sequel, and when Dreamfall arrived the gaming landscape had come a long way. It would take another ten years for Dreamfall's follow up to arrive, and when it did the gaming landscape had moved even further.

Where TLJ was a standard point-and-click affair, and Dreamfall a third-person action-adventure, Chapters would instead present itself as a full blown episodic drama, a format popularized by Telltale's The Walking Dead and Dontnod's Life is Strange. The adventure game, long thought dead, had now been resurrected in a new form, and it seems fitting that The Longest Journey would see a revival along with it.

Chapters is in many ways the biggest departure from the series so far. Like the contemporaries that influenced it, game-play is paired down to a bare minimum, with character interaction and dialogue taking on a a greater focus. It would also be the first in the series to give the player binary choices that would impact the plot of the game. One of the neat tricks it does is trigger a message stating 'The Balance Has Shifted' upon an important decision being made. In any other game this would be a simple reminder to the player, but in a series that has constantly framed 'The Balance' as a critical, world shaping power, this gives your decisions real weight.

Dreamfall had finished on a cliffhanger, leaving many plot threads unfinished. I can't imagine what it must have been like, waiting ten years, not knowing if Zoë would even come out of that coma. Indeed, the series was in a precarious position, and it was only the changing landscape of crowdfunding that gave it new life. Tørnquist and new developer Red Thread seem to have been very aware of this, and go to great pains to truly bring together a satisfying conclusion.

Like Dreamfall, Chapters is less of a self contained story and more an installment of a larger series. Going from Dreamfall to Chapters feels natural, and the two clearly compliment each other as part one and part two of the same plot.

The story picks up almost immediately where we left off with Zoë in a coma, Kian imprisoned and April dead. It doesn't take long to get the plot moving however, with Zoë finally awaking and moving to a new city, Europolis, and Kian escaping to an uneasy alliance with the Marcurian rebellion. It also introduces a new character, Saga, who's life we play through gradually, and who's importance does not appear to be immediately apparent.

If you thought the politics would stop with Dreamfall then you'd be very much mistaken. In many ways Chapters itself becomes more overtly political in telling an allegory for the current climate. In Europolis, we see a crisis unfold around the coming election, as the two main parties are represented by a right-wing fascistic bully and a morally compromised centrist, while the far left struggles to make a diffidence due to constant infighting. Kudos to Tørnquist for so succinctly framing the problems that continue to plague western politics.

In Marcuria, the Iraq War allegory mostly gives way to a focus on nationalism and xenophobia. Onor Hilloriss, a minor villain, is clearly a stand in for many right-wing European politicians, and definitely influenced by one from the UK in particular. Through Kian we see more of the Azadi's compromised occupation and how it was intended as a mostly benevolent campaign that was, instead, prolonged and manipulated by the powerful few for their own ends. A clear representation of how many feel about the never-ending War on Terror.

Chapters weaves these stories intrinsically into each other, showing that both Zoë and Kian's struggle to find a place in the world is absolutely tied to mankind's self destructive impulses. The political chaos in Europolis and Marcuria is caused by the exact same longing that the characters suffer from, and sticking with the themes of the earlier games, the only cure is to move forward. The past can never be regained.

And it's these themes that are so wonderfully brought to a head in Chapters in bizarre and wonderful ways. Not only does the game draw back to characters and storylines from the first entry in the series, but it expands the scope even furthers, from The Balance, to The Dreaming, to Storytime itself.

It's fitting, in a way, that each entry in the series has evolved in tandem with the adventure genre. The Longest Journey couldn't have stayed a point-and-click adventure game, it had to evolve with updated technology and changing audience tastes. Just like the characters, you can't stay in the same place forever, you just can't, you have to keep moving. It's how you stay alive.

Thus, over the course of three games, we see old lives put to bed and new ones embraced. Zoë finally finds her place in the world, Kian brings an end to the Azadi occupation and April finally realizes her destiny through reincarnation as Saga, becoming the old lady in the comfy chair that was recalling the tale all the way back in The Longest Journey.

On it's own, Dreamfall Chapters is a fine and inventive episodic drama. As the final entry in the series, it ties everything together to make them all greater than the sum of their parts. The stories and lives we witness are universal, but what's even more wonderful is just how broad the scope is.

This isn't a story about mighty warriors or powerful space marines. It's a story about artists, farmers, mechanics, bar owners and computer programmers. It's a story about the dispossessed, the persecuted and the downtrodden. It's not a power fantasy, it doesn't offer any easy answers, but it's comforting too. It lets the player into the lives of it's characters and shows that we aren't the only ones who struggle to find our place in the world.

This is only reinforced by the diversity of it's characters. Back when I was talking about The Longest Journey I already mentioned that the cast was pretty diverse to begin with, but the decision to put LGBT and POC characters front and center brings it's themes of belonging right to the forefront. A less diverse game would have been unquestionably a weaker one.

Gripes? I have a couple. The change in Kian's voice actor between games is pretty jarring, particularly how he goes from soft spoken in Dreamfall to deep and gravelly in Chapters. His redesign also looks lighter skinned, so take that as you will. The game also struggles to shake it's predecessors obtuse puzzles every now and again, in contrast to it's contemporaries more straightforward solutions. Still, these are all minor, and the freedom to choose the path of the story, and explore Marcuira in full for the very first time, more than makes up for it.

The Longest Journey series was intend to have one more entry, The Longest Journey Home, a sort of interquel set between TLJ and Dreamfall that would have followed April and gone back to the series roots as a classic point-and-click. It was set as a stretch goal for Chapters' funding, but the goal was never met, forcing Tørnquist to put the project on ice. In a way, I'm glad that this happened. I don't think it would be in the series best interest to see a sequel so immediate or nostalgic. I'd much rather see Tørnquist come back to it in another ten years time, when the gaming industry, and the world in general, has once again moved on.

All things considered, Chapters is a worthy conclusion, and elevates the series to that lofty status of high art. The worlds of Arcadia and Stark closely mirror our own, and gently warn of the pitfalls of historic reverence, and encourages us to take hold of our own destiny. I can't recommend the series enough. If you've never played them before, you have to check them out, and if you're a long time fan, they are absolutely worth a revisit.

Jack Harvey 2017. Dreamfall Chapters is (c) Red Thread Games